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A real-life example please -
the fictional is such a tease.
The rigor Eros makes it look
like all the hard work's such a breeze

With A Sophomoric entry
Laden with some seniority
Is none the less completely bunk -
It's Strangled elementary.

I simply can't believe it's true
Without a real point of view.
Since Every single case I've seen
Is Grim, as when the word was new.

When every sight I see is Rot
I can't but think that love is not
Quite what we've made it out to be;
A Poem without a single thought.

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Kinda like this one. Not too bad, y'know.

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*0hgravity Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this one too.
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~spearofhope Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Every time I read it again, I'm sure I won't like it anymore. I like it the way a person likes a guilty pleasure. Oh well.

thanks for the comment! Glad you enjoyed.
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*0hgravity Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe, I know what you mean.

welcome!
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`vespera Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not too bad, at all ;)
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